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I come to you in my hour of need
All you do is hold me down
Watching me bleed

Is it the fear of you that I lack
Or am I enjoying the pain
Your nails tearing into my back

It is more than that and you know it so well
Always in the shadows
My personal Hell

So go ahead and thrust your fingers into my chest
My soul is gone
My heart at rest

Finally, you dug in way too deep
Blood pooling around me
In my final sleep

I wish I could see your look of distain
As the sirens sound
Unable to remain

The call I made when I stood at your door
This time it will be you
A prison whore

Remember me my love as they use you without care
In your demon’s embrace
You’ll find me there

Each time they thrust in taking what you have
My cries will echo
Giving salt instead of salve

Until in the deepest darkest of night
You come to understand
You’re in the noose so tight

Then dropping off into that abyss of death
I will be the one
Savoring your last breath
A little something I wrote.
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omokurasu Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2007
OMG thats amazing
ur really talented
^^
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ardunt Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just played with the photo a little, but the poetry is all mine. Thank you for the compliment and letting me know what you thought, it is always appreciated.
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twitchness Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2007
wow well written, nicely done
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ardunt Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, I enjoy jotting this thoughts down and sharing them, if for no other reason, than the sharing.
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twitchness Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007
no better reason
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DreamsStillWeep Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Very intense. Very pretty. I like it alot.
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ardunt Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the honest comment as well as the :+fav: it is all very appreciated.
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DreamsStillWeep Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
You're certainly welcome, I enjoyed the piece very much. =)
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Hera-of-Stockholm Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2007
:drying: now where is my cleenex
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ardunt Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for commenting my friend. :hug:
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