I come to you in my hour of need
All you do is hold me down
Watching me bleed
Is it the fear of you that I lack
Or am I enjoying the pain
Your nails tearing into my back
It is more than that and you know it so well
Always in the shadows
My personal Hell
So go ahead and thrust your fingers into my chest
My soul is gone
My heart at rest
Finally, you dug in way too deep
Blood pooling around me
In my final sleep
I wish I could see your look of distain
As the sirens sound
Unable to remain
The call I made when I stood at your door
This time it will be you
A prison whore
Remember me my love as they use you without care
In your demons embrace
Youll find me there
Each time they thrust in taking what you have
My cries will echo
Giving salt instead of salve
Until in the deepest darkest of night
You come to understand
Youre in the noose so tight
Then dropping off into that abyss of death
I will be the one
Savoring your last breath
A little something I wrote.
OMG thats amazing
ur really talented
ur really talented
I just played with the photo a little, but the poetry is all mine. Thank you for the compliment and letting me know what you thought, it is always appreciated.
wow well written, nicely done
Thank you, I enjoy jotting this thoughts down and sharing them, if for no other reason, than the sharing.
Very intense. Very pretty. I like it alot.
Thank you for the honest comment as well as the it is all very appreciated.
:drying: now where is my cleenex
wow, awesome work ardunt!
Oh .................. WOW. This is beautiful!
Always this amazing writing...!
Wow. Incredibly intense. I'd hate to be on your bad side if that is what it's like! Lovely writing though.
Not me, tame as a pussy cat, a regular teddy bear I am.
No, I do not have a problem with that, let me know when it is ready.
okai, should be ready by tomorrow evening, am revising and shizz so i'm trying to prioritize.
No problem, I will do my best to check in then on the weekend so I can get to it
I have a really good picture to accompany this. xxx