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I come to you in my hour of need
All you do is hold me down
Watching me bleed

Is it the fear of you that I lack
Or am I enjoying the pain
Your nails tearing into my back

It is more than that and you know it so well
Always in the shadows
My personal Hell

So go ahead and thrust your fingers into my chest
My soul is gone
My heart at rest

Finally, you dug in way too deep
Blood pooling around me
In my final sleep

I wish I could see your look of distain
As the sirens sound
Unable to remain

The call I made when I stood at your door
This time it will be you
A prison whore

Remember me my love as they use you without care
In your demon’s embrace
You’ll find me there

Each time they thrust in taking what you have
My cries will echo
Giving salt instead of salve

Until in the deepest darkest of night
You come to understand
You’re in the noose so tight

Then dropping off into that abyss of death
I will be the one
Savoring your last breath
A little something I wrote.
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omokurasu Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2007
OMG thats amazing
ur really talented
^^
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ardunt Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just played with the photo a little, but the poetry is all mine. Thank you for the compliment and letting me know what you thought, it is always appreciated.
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twitchness Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2007
wow well written, nicely done
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, I enjoy jotting this thoughts down and sharing them, if for no other reason, than the sharing.
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:icontwitchness:
twitchness Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007
no better reason
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DreamsStillWeep Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Very intense. Very pretty. I like it alot.
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the honest comment as well as the :+fav: it is all very appreciated.
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:icondreamsstillweep:
DreamsStillWeep Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
You're certainly welcome, I enjoyed the piece very much. =)
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:iconhera-of-stockholm:
Hera-of-Stockholm Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2007
:drying: now where is my cleenex
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for commenting my friend. :hug:
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:iconhera-of-stockholm:
Hera-of-Stockholm Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007
My pleassure :glomp:
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pirate-tendencies Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
wow, awesome work ardunt! :D
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, something a little darker than normal.
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:iconpirate-tendencies:
pirate-tendencies Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007
thats for sure.
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:icongodofmyworld:
godofmyworld Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
Oh .................. WOW. This is beautiful!
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.
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:icongodofmyworld:
godofmyworld Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2007
Of course!
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:iconspneverbefore:
SPneverbefore Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist
Always this amazing writing...!
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much.
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:iconbellasmiles:
bellasmiles Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
Wow. Incredibly intense. I'd hate to be on your bad side if that is what it's like! Lovely writing though. :)
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not me, tame as a pussy cat, a regular teddy bear I am.
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:iconbellasmiles:
bellasmiles Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
Even a pussy cat has some claws that can cut deep when needing to defend itself. ;)
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:iconemo-wench:
emo-wench Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
either i dont mind, i'll put it up soon, need to edit it a little, you don't mind a little graphic content do you.
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, I do not have a problem with that, let me know when it is ready.
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:iconemo-wench:
emo-wench Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
okai, should be ready by tomorrow evening, am revising and shizz so i'm trying to prioritize.
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem, I will do my best to check in then on the weekend so I can get to it ;)
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:iconemo-wench:
emo-wench Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
okai, i may be able to get it up by tonght.xxx
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is no rush, I appreciate anything that moves someone in a direction and this will become our collaboration :D
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:iconemo-wench:
emo-wench Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
Lol, okai, well if i get a chance tonight i'll do it. The lighting needs cleaning up a little. xxx
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emo-wench Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
I have a really good picture to accompany this. xxx
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:iconardunt:
ardunt Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You do, would you like me to post it along with it and give you credit for it, or would you like me to emboss my words on it and post it?
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:iconemo-wench:
emo-wench Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
either i dont mind, i'll put it up soon, need to edit it a little, you don't mind a little graphic content do you.
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